Nan said ¨Get your togs were going to the beach.¨
I woke my brothers Jayden and Jodeci I said ¨We´re going to the beach.¨
We packed all our stuff by the time we ate breakfast my aunt Mereana arrived. I nearly forgot that I had my pajamas on I needed some shorts and a t-shirt to get in the car. We finally got to the beach my Nan grabbed the gumboots, bucket and the knife to get lots of pipis and oysters.
We packed all our stuff by the time we ate breakfast my aunt Mereana arrived. I nearly forgot that I had my pajamas on I needed some shorts and a t-shirt to get in the car. We finally got to the beach my Nan grabbed the gumboots, bucket and the knife to get lots of pipis and oysters.
We did some bombs off the wharf. After we had a BBQ we went home and we ate the lovely seafood.
WALHT write an interesting recount.
I am trying to add more detail.
I found it easy because we practiced writing retells
Next time I want to remember to add full stops.
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